Just simply everything about it is wrong. The angels of cards, the anatomy in perspective, the poses look not dynamic enough...how's I said, simply everything!
Actually your perspective has gotten way better since I remember first seeing you start with DP. You really stepped up a notch and actually DO try a lot of variations in perspective, which is good to see than today's more overall lackluster of perspective tries.. most people always stick to a few simple ones, but you branch out quite a bit from like overhead views or far away. In my view, it's pretty well put. Your anatomy is quite spot on as well. The only thing I could think of saying that's wrong (in say this comic) would be the very close up on Danny's face. I think the shading might make it look a little dis proportioned. Otherwise, it's a great piece and you do not suck. Your style is wicked neat. Sorry for the longass rant too lol..